The feedback I got from pitch No. 2 was very positive, and the casual nature of the video won some points. I decided to stay with that casual theme this time around. I think in my last pitch I did a poor job of including information about the actual product, so I wanted to make sure I mentioned it in this one. I do think the last video was informative and had good information, so I wanted to continue with some more adulting-type scenarios.
I think your elevator pitch this time was indeed very informative and I think your business idea truly does have potential it is something I have never even thought of and I believe it is a no brainer solution to a problem thousands of Americans face each and every day. I think you spoke very well and delivered on your idea efficiently and effectively. Great elevator pitch and good luck with your business idea.
Hey James, Congratulations on your engagement! I am sure wedding planning is very stressful. It is pretty cool that you turned the stress you are feeling into a way to extend the services that your app offers. Also I totally agree with you that everyone should have AAA. A few months ago I hit something and popped my tire on I-75 and they came and bailed me out of that situation. I was very grateful to have them.
Hey James,
ReplyDeleteI think your elevator pitch this time was indeed very informative and I think your business idea truly does have potential it is something I have never even thought of and I believe it is a no brainer solution to a problem thousands of Americans face each and every day. I think you spoke very well and delivered on your idea efficiently and effectively. Great elevator pitch and good luck with your business idea.
Hey James,
ReplyDeleteCongratulations on your engagement! I am sure wedding planning is very stressful. It is pretty cool that you turned the stress you are feeling into a way to extend the services that your app offers. Also I totally agree with you that everyone should have AAA. A few months ago I hit something and popped my tire on I-75 and they came and bailed me out of that situation. I was very grateful to have them.